Yes i agree that sports and social activities in the universities and colleges are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Seasons are the following :
1) sports and social activities unite people together. Which means that they should receive equail financial suport the same with libraries. If sports and social activities receive equal financial support people will be more united which is very important in the universities and colleges. Unity bring progress and togetherness.
2) sports and social activities reduces tension and depression. Libraries is a place people read but after more reading one still need to socialise and engage themselves in sports and social activities to reduce the tension and the pressure in them. So therefore sports and social activities should receive equal support like labraries .
3) sports and social activities gives people the ability to develop their physical appearances with good sports social equipment many students can develop their talents, like in football, culf, basket ball,gymnastics, singing , dancing, comedians etc. With equal financial suport people will be able to identify their different talents in sports and social activities.
Therefore with those reasons i mentioned i believe that is important for sports and social activities to reduce equal financial support like libraries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 209.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68899521531 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78547620964 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516746411483 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6420451839 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378424412292 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180687758015 0.076458572812 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124304213043 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234587657683 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130030587716 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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