The speaker made few points casting doubt on specific points made in the reading passage;
1). The speaker cast doubt that four days work per week for The employees with cost companys more and also companies are loose more profit . The speaker believes that if four days work a week for employees that companies won't be meeting up their target which at the end will cost them to loose customers and profit . Because if a company are unable to satisfy it's customers they'd start having lessier profit as a company that was built to satisfy it's customers and maximise profit.
2). The speaker pointed out his doubt that offering employees four days a week will cost companies more money in terms of hiring more workers to perform the remaining task in a week . Hiring more workers requires more working equipments . Companies will spend more if offering employees four days a week .
3).The speaker also hinted doubt that offering employees four days a week which gives them time and space for leisures and time for their family menbers can decrease their duties and performance at work. The speaker believes that four days working a week can reduce their chances of advancing on their career.
4). The speaker hinted out that four days employees maybe the first to loose their job in time of economic downsizing.
5). The speaker also hinted out that current job maybe unpleasant while creating more new job will be hard. And the cost of things like health will cost more.
In conclusion, the speaker cast doubt with the specific points he made.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and also companies are loose more profit . The speaker believes that if four days ...
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... also companies are loose more profit . The speaker believes that if four days work...
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...rget which at the end will cost them to loose customers and profit . Because if a com...
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... cost them to loose customers and profit . Because if a company are unable to sati...
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...any are unable to satisfy its customers theyd start having lessier profit as a compan...
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... to perform the remaining task in a week . Hiring more workers requires more worki...
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...week which gives them time and space for leisures and time for their family menbe...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
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... four days employees maybe the first to loose their job in time of economic downsizin...
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... in time of economic downsizing. 5. The speaker also hinted out that current jo...
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...ill be hard. And the cost of things like health will cost more. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85660377358 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24513190792 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441509433962 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8695885638 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06452816374 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360891192996 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164969088121 0.0996497079465 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122713005559 0.0662205650399 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167357817951 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132762496243 0.0443174109184 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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