In any relationship, always telling the truth should be the utmost priority. Without truthfullness, any relationship is prone to falling apart. One would need to know the importance of telling the truth, and the dangers of neglecting this fact, to appreciate the discussion.
Firstly, it must be said that truthfullness is a virtue. By nature, we do not like to be deceived and we abhor those who deal in deception. Consider the many origin or mythical stories found in various cultures. In many of those stories, we see deceptive figures, whom the hero of the story will need to face against. Often times adhering to the decepitve figure’s advice results in catastrophic consequences for the hero of the story. It is to show that we, as human beings, value truthfullness beyond anything, and we like to hear the truth and to not be misled.
Perhaps more imporant than the consequences that one’s lie brings upon the people around him, are the many vile fibers that are sewed into a person’s very core and existence. There may be people who have never lied even once. But there certainly are no people who have lied only twice. One lie begs for a train of lies to follow. To cover up a lie, one would need to make additional lies, sometimes even getting lost in his or her own fabricated story. How would one continue to live a healthy life if he or she starts on this path of doom?
In a relationship, the matter is even more complicated. In a relationship, there are expectations from both sides. And as said before, by our nature, we expect the other person to be truthfull. In fact, it is a prerequisite in many relationships and while not written on paper in many cases, remains one of the very basic expectations. If I cannot ensure that the other person is telling me the truth or not, how then, would I even begin to communicate with that person? Say, that person is facing an issue. How can I be of any help when the truth of the matter is not laid before me in the first place? The fact that truthfullness, is evidently a condition in many relationships, makes it all the more important.
In conclusion, being truthfull in any relationship is of great importance and should be the first priority and expectation. For truthfullness is a virtue that none of us can do without. A disregard for it can bring grave consequences. In any relationship, there needs to be an agreement on telling the truth first and foremost so that proper communication between the people in said
relationship can be accomplished and the their various problems adressed and hopefully solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun origin seems to be countable; consider using: 'many origins'.
Suggestion: many origins
...ose who deal in deception. Consider the many origin or mythical stories found in various cu...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...quences that one's lie brings upon the people around him, are the many vile fibers that are sewe...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...nce. There may be people who have never lied even once. But there certainly are no p...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
... there certainly are no people who have lied only twice. One lie begs for a train of...
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Line 9, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...communication between the people in said relationship can be accomplished and the...
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Line 10, column 38, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
... relationship can be accomplished and the their various problems adressed and hopefully...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion, in fact, in many cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74008810573 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96129953907 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506607929515 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4566113191 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7037037037 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8148148148 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85185185185 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120100367726 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350904235293 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460869689439 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762005342206 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661151599179 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.