Although telling the truth is consider the good habit, we usually advice our children to always speak truth. Some people believes that telling the truth is most significant in any relationship between the people while others have opposite views. I definitely agree that always telling the truth is most important consideration in any relations. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, always telling the truth boost our trust on each other, which is essential for any relations. If we don't trust each other we may not able to shear our feeling our secrets and others daily matters. If someone we knows he always speak truth we automatically start trust on him on daily bases. for instance, I have many friends but i don't shear all my secrets with them because many of them are not trustworthy because they most of time lying. But few of them they always ell me the truth if they need money they are very straight forward to tell the actual reasons for money. So I always appreciate them on this act, because it's encourage me to trust on them for telling me truth.
Moreover, telling the truth we can avoid embarrassment when our white lie revels in front of others. some people to show their status they manipulate many false stories. When they caught red handed they feel very embarrass. For example, one of my relative who married to a women from other state,the marriage was arranged by his parents. They told the women that their son is working in a big firm in higher post while the truth was quite opposite, he was ordinary Clark their. Unfortunately they didn't tell the truth while they were arrange the engagement. When they got married the she knows the truth. This one lie ruin his life because they divorced and they had one child.Telling truth although seems very difficult at that time but we can avoid the ling term consequences of telling a lie.
In conclusion, telling the truth we gain the trust of others people and we can shears our many things with others. Also we can avoid the negative effect f telling a lie which may effect the whole family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68032786885 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40078128613 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489071038251 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.850508816 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.65 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159208341353 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666916284105 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736917133325 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127548509364 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096274726448 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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