I would agree that, always telling the truth in any relationship between two people plays a crucial role for a healthy relation. I would even point to say that it depends on one personal how to come across the truth if it’s way bitter to accept. At this situation, it only gives the person who is telling the truth can have a peace of mind and a light heart than the other person who cannot really accept it. On the other hand, sometimes the relationship also breaks due to over communication with the truths where the other person cannot withstand the reality. Balancing is the key role in any relationship. Truth does not always needs to a bitter one , but situation and circumstances around also play a major role in how the other person would react. People do expect that their partner should be fair enough and open to share their good and bad times , but when it comes to the point of a bitter truth, it’s externally devastating to that person. So, in a conclusion , I would say truth needs to be exposed but in a good intaking way to others to keep their relationship strong , healthy and forever.
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-05 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.Use specific reasons and examples to suppo 60
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y that it depends on one personal how to come across the truth if it's way b...
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Line 1, column 638, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...any relationship. Truth does not always needs to a bitter one , but situation and cir...
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Line 1, column 659, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...th does not always needs to a bitter one , but situation and circumstances around ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d open to share their good and bad times , but when it comes to the point of a bit...
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Line 1, column 982, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ting to that person. So, in a conclusion , I would say truth needs to be exposed b...
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Line 1, column 1093, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...others to keep their relationship strong , healthy and forever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.555 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55216152518 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5632048812 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130319484338 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685758166016 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504660408092 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130319484338 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 86.8835125448 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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