Friends are a very important part of our life as they have a lot of influences in our life. Some people believe that it is more important to make new friends than to keep old friends because we cannot always be connected to our old friends. In new places, we have to make new friends. However, in my opinion, I believe that it is better to keep old friends than to make new friends for the following three reasons.
First of all, friends with whom we have been together for a long time are the most important people in our life. For example, our childhood friends sometimes become a part of our own family. The relationship between my childhood friends is stronger than any other friend of my life. So would do anything to keep them in my life forever. In contrast, making new friends every now and then does not make strong bonding of friendship. This is why I would give more importance to keeping old friends rather than making new ones.
Second of all, friends who have been with us before will be with us in the future too and we trust them with our hearts. They will come to help us no matter what and I would do the same for them too. These do not really happen with new friendships. From my personal experience, I have faced so many problems in my life and my childhood friend Samina was always the one with whom I shared all my problems. She was always there for me even on the nights before our exams when I was crying for my dead pet "Piku". She is still on my first contact list and even though we don't live in the same city now, we video call each other every weekend. But I don't have that much contact or meetups with my college friends or university friends.
Finally, as an introverted person, making new friends is very much difficult for me. I am not an outgoing or talkative person. Also, I don't enjoy social events that much, and I barely attend any events without my friends. I find it very much troublesome in meeting new people and making new friends. And when it comes to finding people with the same mentality is harder than anything.
In conclusion, I believe friends make our lives easier and we need our friends every day of our life. To me, it is more important to keep old friends than to make new friends for these reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...orever. In contrast, making new friends every now and then does not make strong bonding of friends...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y first contact list and even though we dont live in the same city now, we video cal...
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Suggestion: don't
...eo call each other every weekend. But I dont have that much contact or meetups with ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n outgoing or talkative person. Also, I dont enjoy social events that much, and I ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39386792453 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37164140181 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445754716981 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.544193592 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.625 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273540387289 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105688808196 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928162709727 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202386623292 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874278157458 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.