Finding new friend is challenging for most of us. Some people prefer to stick to their old friend rather than meeting new people and getting close to them. Surely keeping old friend is important. However, in my opinion it always better to try to find new friend. We can learn from new friend more, we are able to improve our social activities and enlarge our friend group by finding new friend and some time new people make better opportunity for us to enhanse our life.
First, finding new friend help us to learn more. We might meet some people, for example from diffrent area of study. They can teach us a lots about their field which might be vague to us. Not to forget that new friend will some they become old friend, so finding new friend continously will help us to increase our knowledge more and more. For example, last summer in a camp which I toke apart, I meet a new friend who study physic and we talk so much about his field. As an engeenring student I learn a lot of thing from him.
Second, human is a social creature and he always needs to be connected we other human. We should permanently care about our social activity. Being alone, far from society, definitly will cause damage to some asspect of our life. Finding a new friend is one of the best way to increase our social activity. For instance, one of my friend is so sociable. He gets friend with people right after he meets them. As result, most the time, when I see him, he is with someone and he is laughing, talking, etc. To be honest, sometime I envy him for his social life.
Third, meeting new people sometime can bring us unique opportunity to improve our life. As an example, four years agomy father lost his job. He was worry a lot about his career. Financially, we had plenty of problem which put more pressure on my father. And at last some day my father get familiar with a new friend through one of his colleage. The new friend was a manager at company. He hired my father immidiately after they talked about the job, with a high salary. There was the moment that I realize how it is improtant to expand relationship with new other people.
In conclusion, a friend is a precious asset and we should always care about it. We always should try to keep our friend close to ourselves and be kind to them. However, it is more important to extend our friendship with now people. They can teach us more, they can help us to have more appropriate social life and how know? they might bring us better opportunity to improve our life.
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...rtant. However, in my opinion it always better to try to find new friend. We can learn...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ffrent area of study. They can teach us a lots about their field which might be vague ...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ic and we talk so much about his field. As an engeenring student I learn a lot of ...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...field. As an engeenring student I learn a lot of thing from him. Second, human is a social ...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: I_AM_WORRY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worried'?
Suggestion: worried
...years agomy father lost his job. He was worry a lot about his career. Financially, we...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of problems'.
Suggestion: plenty of problems
...t about his career. Financially, we had plenty of problem which put more pressure on my father. A...
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Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e appropriate social life and how know? they might bring us better opportunity to im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43440860215 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28393171658 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447311827957 0.524837075471 85% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.337465303 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4375 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.53125 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176063722627 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565934317174 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482082398134 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118451479852 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473518185398 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.