Friends constitute important parts of our lives. In many cases we may feel closer to our friends than even our family members. I believe keeping our old friends and making new friends are both essentially important and nobody has to decide between them. However, I think keeping touch with old friends can be a little more rewarding. I am sure a lot of people follow the same idea. I have two main reasons for my opinion.
Firstly, an old friend always makes you feel more comfortable. Old friends know you better and therefore knows how to help you out in tough situations. In regard to problems and life difficulties in the presence of old friends you are featured with a lot of solutions, support and pity. Coming over these tough situations life becomes more comfortable and the old friends appear more valuable. For example, I remember when I was a student in Tehran and I was far from home. One day that I caught a terrible cold that I could not even go out of my room. My roommate which we have been friends together since the high school took care of me meticulously. We had very nice moments together and I hardly missed home and I sometimes made new friends but most of them remained as only ordinary friends, you know not close friends and barely felt fully trusted or supported by them. As you can see old friends can really make our life more comfortable and full of intimacy.
Secondly, some may oppose it by I still support the fact that old friends are making our life more interesting or in other words sweeter. It is a lot more likely that your new friends bring you up with many new interesting experiences but what I try to state here is just something more than being new. It is old but sweet old. I mean sharing many pleasant events with your true and old friends is somehow like an invisible tool that is attached to your friends and each time you see them, spontaneously evokes those good memories and makes you feel happy. For instance, when we were students we would go out together every weekends. We had hundreds of great moments and experiences and would love to review them sometimes. Even now years from graduation I feel a deep happiness each time I see this friend. Having the experience of this friendship taught me that it makes much more sense to keep in touch with your especial old friends.
In sum, though some may oppose the idea of keeping old friends are somehow more important and Inevitably making new friends would be full of joy and exciting. But I really believe that they are not attached exactly by the same importance. Not only old friends make your life more comfortable and peaceful, but also keeping them means keeping yourself happier.
I came to the conclusion that everyone may want to make new friends to have new perspectives however only a few of them after a long time turn to be a true old friend and they had better keep in touch with these friends or they will lose a truly valuable thing in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'situations'' or 'situation's'?
Suggestion: situations'; situation's
...pport and pity. Coming over these tough situations life becomes more comfortable and the o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, i mean, i think, you know, in many cases, in other words, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2436.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 537.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53631284916 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43503369204 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474860335196 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3060841705 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.59259259259 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332580560365 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101592167939 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747005725396 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213842454308 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496704252238 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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