It is generally accepted that people tend to make friends and spend their leisure time with them in an intimate relationship. This type of behavior can be obviously observed in all educational institutions and workplaces. The frequent question comes to people's mind is about a decision on whether they should keep their old friends, as a more important relationship, or make new friends. In my opinion, there is no concrete answer to this question because of different conditions.
First, sometimes old friends have advantages outweigh the benefits people may have with their new friends. Generally, people consider different factors like loyalty, honesty, and so on in any relationship with their friends. Obviously, people require enough time to evaluate these factors in their friends' behavior and find a sense of trustworthy. Given this fact, people in harsh conditions often count on their old friends more than new friends. For instance, Larry Page and his classmate, co-founders of Google, are known as close old friends that help each other in difficult situations in their business thanks to their long-standing friendship.
Second, people's personal characteristics are changed due to exposure to different conditions in life and this leads to having different friends in different stages of life. All People find it interesting that they can experience happiness and a good time in presence of their friends. This finding begins when they find their first friends in kindergarten and primary schools. However, the fact is that people have different habits and personal characteristics throughout their life. Therefore, they may find serious conflicts with a friend while they have been the best friend for each other before that. This is a known fact that leads to a change in life and can be described in psychological terms.
In conclusion, unlike this fact that people often have a more intimate relationship with their old friends, it is my deep conviction that making new friends happens inevitably due to the fact that people change in their life and it strongly depends upon the conditions they are exposed to.
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- TPO-32 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...kplaces. The frequent question comes to peoples mind is about a decision on whether the...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26686217009 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85766856719 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492668621701 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9659429791 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139407147296 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584389039006 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568901715011 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109159619336 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409809564413 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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