Human is social by nature so he is in continuous looking for new relationships, family and friends are important for his existence, however there is a kind of people who think that it’s better to having a small circle of relations by keeping the old friends instead looking for a new ones. In my opinion I think it’s important too keep my old friends and in the same time making a new ones, and I will explain my point of view in the following essay.
First of all, nowadays it is to hard or even impossible to find a real and true friend that care of you and wish you the best, because almost all relationships became fake and fall of envy thus, when we found a real, loyal and honest friend we must preserve it and try to protect this relationship because it is anecdotic, and as a compelling example I have a friend her name is Sarah and will be always thankful to have Her in my live,she is my best friend and she was a good support when I lost my grandmother she spent a long time in my side to help me to resist my grief.
Secondly, in Our daily life we sure meet a new people every day and with time we used to them and have a special feeling toward them, new friends give us the opportunity to discover a new habits, adventures, thoughts, ..etc.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that both ideas are correct, keeping our old friends and in same time try to make new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...e old friends instead looking for a new ones. In my opinion I think it's import...
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Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to keep'?
Suggestion: to keep
... my opinion I think it's important too keep my old friends and in the same time mak...
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Line 1, column 396, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...iends and in the same time making a new ones, and I will explain my point of view in...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... essay. First of all, nowadays it is to hard or even impossible to find a real ...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , she
...e always thankful to have Her in my live,she is my best friend and she was a good s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s thankful to have Her in my live,she is my best friend and she was a good suppor...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'habit'?
Suggestion: habit
...ve us the opportunity to discover a new habits, adventures, thoughts, ..etc. In con...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ver a new habits, adventures, thoughts, ..etc. In conclusion, I strongly believ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32196969697 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51654021082 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.1344086022 258% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.526298772 48.9658058833 326% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.2 100.406767564 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.8 20.6045352989 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8 5.45110844103 418% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181210293634 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112046938197 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031963332257 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11819649982 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038279758164 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 11.7677419355 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.08 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 10.1575268817 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.0537634409 227% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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