There is no doubt that technology helps people a lot thus, become an important element in his daily routine. Some people think that this technology has made people less socially active,while others disagree, in my opinion I totally agree and I will explore why in the following essay.
First of all, phones mobile connected to internet are the compelling example of this technology, all of us spend hours and hours front of the screen hence, disconnected from this world, while it is better to sit with our families and enjoy their company before it will be late. It is bothering to serve dinner and every member of the family hold a phone in her hands instead enjoying the meal.
Secondly, other figures of this phenomenon is addicting to videos games, some scientists sad that’s harms gamer’s health especially his mental capacity, and enclose him in a dark circle where it is hard for him to build more relashionships and get a new friends.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that modern technology if used in the wrong way tend to make a laisy and unsociable persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...ogy has made people less socially active,while others disagree, in my opinion I totall...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...build more relashionships and get a new friends. In conclusion, I strongly believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8972972973 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72109418116 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708108108108 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9634099769 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2071773049 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934866059672 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10870262468 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11214534836 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104242629042 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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