Nowadays, Technology has significant influence in the human lifestyle. human lifestyle has the meaningless change in last decades, besides that human transportation tools has changed rapidly in the 20th century. I support the idea that, in the future, amount of the cars will be reduced rapidly. improving the technology, public transportation, reducing the pollution is the three reason of reducing cars in the street in the future . this essay will explore the reason of this changes by stating some reasons.
At first, technology improvement will change the systems of the travelling in the future. technology will enthusiastic the people to choose a new way in own travelling. for instance, maybe, private airplane will increase in the future and people will be preferred air travelling instead of road tripping. besides, it's impossible at the future that the air travelling is cheaper than road tripping because of technology improvement.
for the scond reason, public transportation is one of the changes that has the important influence in people traveling. I believe that public transportation will be prevalent in the twenty years, increasing the population increase the people tendency toward the public transportation. in addition, public transportation technology will be increase in the future and people won't prefer to waste their time in the massive traffic.
The third reason to claim my preference is increasing the pollution. pollution is results of human excess activity in the earth. humans by establishing the various factories which pollutes the climate, global warming, broken the ozone layer, beside theses car pollution is one of the important factors of pollution in the cities, particularly in the big cities and have threaten the human generation in the future, as regards, government and countries will restrict the using of car, specially petroleum car in the big cities the future and maybe electrical car will be replaced by this type of cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'third', 'thus', 'as regards', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.295652173913 0.229887763892 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.139130434783 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0202898550725 0.046263068375 44% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0144927536232 0.0685040099705 21% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.136231884058 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0463768115942 0.0351676179071 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.01026459145 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00869565217391 0.0309702414327 28% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.139130434783 0.0887237588012 157% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0289855072464 0.0209618222197 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00579710144928 0.0139019557991 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1979.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 311.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.36334405145 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.446945337621 0.338922669872 132% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32154340836 0.251872472559 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244372990354 0.174417080927 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173633440514 0.112833075102 154% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01026459145 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504823151125 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.0135329601 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7333333333 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.5841026717 48.84282405 198% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.933333333 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.8876741693 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.75 1.45489161554 189% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218138817986 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.211475390908 0.103427244359 204% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0884141751574 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.67187523767 0.497263757937 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13745914051 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119065315089 0.114077575197 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455639661068 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.485447510022 0.336927656856 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0119389098379 0.067059652881 18% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173362808778 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162037758602 0.0618886996521 26% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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