Now a days, people enhance their life by involving such kinds of things, which are mainly shows that they are living in 21st century, because of they have a lot of activities to do. Such things break their bond to the community, in which they could capable to survive brilliantly. As a matter of fact, I such know thees type of people who involves many irregular activities. I think, it is important to spends time in enjoying instead of things, which gets you turn off. Like: hanging out with your friends, spend quality time with your family, more over, playing sports just like that you are doing as a part time job.
I would like to point out my first reason, that life is very precious and just make it simple as you can instead being busy in your normal routine. I am always using to go out with my friends to restaurants, parties and musical concerts as well. By this type of life, you can feel each and every beautiful memory of your life.
Secondly, family is the major source of joy, can say this because I have a wonderful family with whom, life really does not make sense of being alone, you will always be pamper, there is always people around you, who make you very close to them and shares your all the facts and figures. What a person wants more than this? I mean this is what we said id life, which is incomplete with out family and you must spend a quality time with them.
In last, but not least, sports are the energetic activity of a person, which he can be very attractive to him as well. Many of the youngsters, mainly of them are boys, playing their favorite sports and get badly involves in these kind of majors. According to me, if you are calling this "wasting of time", so you must have to waste it, because of being in a pressure could leads to many dangerous situation to you.
Hence, do what ever you want to do man, nothing will goes wrong, if you are having a pretty cool routine rather than you will so exhaust that it wont be good enough for your self.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, people enhance their life by involving...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, people enhance their life by involving...
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Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...s that they are living in 21st century, because of they have a lot of activities to do. Such th...
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Line 1, column 606, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ports just like that you are doing as a part time job. I would like to point out my fi...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...at we said id life, which is incomplete with out family and you must spend a quality tim...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...vorite sports and get badly involves in these kind of majors. According to me, if you are ...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...badly involves in these kind of majors. According to me, if you are calling this 'wasting ...
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Line 7, column 384, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...t, because of being in a pressure could leads to many dangerous situation to you. ...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...t ever you want to do man, nothing will goes wrong, if you are having a pretty cool ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, i mean, i think, kind of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38873994638 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19943086654 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536193029491 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1972804326 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214297467538 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710281419869 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061992352642 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121566483464 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837288922261 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.