In today's generations people are more concerned about the basics needs which keeps them happy and cheerful. People are growing into a selfish animal who does not care about other animals and their lives. Personally speaking, human in this generations are more influence by personal enjoyment, comfortable living and self-benefited activities. People are being biased towards environment, society and natural resources.
First of all, human are more unjustified with the environment. People care more about theirs basic needs such as shelter, fire, food and other technological offers rather than the environment in which they survive. Cutting trees for the homes, fire and burning fuel, plastics which creates problem in the environment. Refrigerator is the main source of carbon dioxide which adds hamper effect to the surrounding. For example, people in today's time are more susceptible to asthma which is the adverse result of people's unjustified works to environment. People have no self-esteem of thinking about the place in which they live. Also, people have abundance negative impact on society too.
Additionally, society is the place in which people spend most of their time and are also very important in any person's life. People, as being more narrow minded in their own world they are not fulfilling theirs responsibility towards society. For an instance, one person throws dust, broken bottles and foul-smelling garbage in and around the society in uncivilized way. These dust brings lots of air born disease to society which effect all the people in the society.
Finally, natural resources which is the main source from which people are taking advantage in a negative way. People have develop many technological advances in the world but by using the natural resources. These technologies have destroy the natural resources. Killing animals for the enjoyment of people, cutting trees for making furniture, different explosive bombs explosion in the environment and spoiling the natural plants with pesticides and insecticide. Human behavior has also impact on the natural chain of the nature.
In conclusion, People with blind folded with selfish nature and certain basic facilities has effect so much things around us. People lack of knowledge what they are doing has creates number of destruction in environment, society and nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ir lives. Personally speaking, human in this generations are more influence by perso...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...time and are also very important in any persons life. People, as being more narrow mind...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... from which people are taking advantage in a negative way. People have develop many technological...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...dvantage in a negative way. People have develop many technological advances in the worl...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'destroyed'.
Suggestion: destroyed
...ural resources. These technologies have destroy the natural resources. Killing animals ...
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Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bombs'' or 'bomb's'?
Suggestion: bombs'; bomb's
...r making furniture, different explosive bombs explosion in the environment and spoili...
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Line 7, column 488, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'impacted'.
Suggestion: impacted
...nd insecticide. Human behavior has also impact on the natural chain of the nature. ...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... certain basic facilities has effect so much things around us. People lack of knowle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45355191257 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75627678613 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7928790973 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14285141993 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413883197977 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430695169638 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913867026139 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698038138616 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.