I agree with the statements. The life today is easier than when my parents were children. In a lot of areas the way of life has improved. Currently the economy and technology bring news resources to enjoy a comfortable life. In the pass the purchasing power was low, the children must work to help their parents to cover the necessities. The life for the kids was unfair. Fortunately, our children will have better opportunities to enjoy their childhood. Thus, in contrast with years ago, there are reasons to consider the above.
Firstly, the technology helps us to make a lot task or entertainment. For instance, the Internet provides us a thousand tools that permit through applications to do the scholar duties in a few minutes. Furthermore, today it brings us the opportunity of recreation by social networks. Besides the technology has increased, so we can use devices such as cell phones, iPods or tablets. In other hands, today, the companies of pharmacology are discovered news medicine to improve the health and proportion a better quality of life.
Secondly, nowadays the economy is better than years ago and this provides us to enjoy a better quality of life. For instance, when my mother was a little girl she had to work to contribute to the necessities of my grandparents, owing to the resources were not enough to maintain the family. Even thought the childhood years ago was not easy for her, now she enjoy a better life conditions and a comfortable economic status.
Thirdly, currently there are more facilities obtain credits. The companies offer credits without a lot of requests to buy a car or a house. In contrast with this, in the of my mother’s childhood , her father never could to buy a house. The financial life of my mother’s parents could not afford it. Nevertheless, today I can enjoy a comfortable house and furthermore, a luxurious car that let me a fast transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...years ago was not easy for her, now she enjoy a better life conditions and a comforta...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...of requests to buy a car or a house. In contrast with this, in the of my mother's c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is, in the of my mother's childhood , her father never could to buy a house. ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270777479893 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.13672922252 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.058981233244 0.0866891130778 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0482573726542 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.058981233244 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.088471849866 0.118717715034 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0134048257373 0.0351676179071 38% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.01601877162 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0428954423592 0.0309702414327 139% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120643431635 0.0887237588012 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0160857908847 0.0209618222197 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00804289544236 0.0139019557991 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1923.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 325.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91692307692 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332307692308 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264615384615 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203076923077 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144615384615 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01601877162 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532307692308 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 55.8965319903 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4761904762 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7927331877 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 41.9377289377 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.52747252747 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27631239236 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0915723652427 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0911376111955 0.0752933317313 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481294654241 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119425501314 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105363681748 0.114077575197 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558923675263 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361162969847 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0734846194195 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190041464633 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051984987265 0.0618886996521 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.