When we compare how people lived in the past with today's people life condition this will be clear for us that life had changed in a great way especially in aspect of comfort and facilities. On the other hand, some issue such as fierce competition, long dreams, long term purposes cause human being try and work harder to build easier life but some others problems have been emerged in the modern world.
First, by growth of science and technology many tools and equipment have been discovered making our life more comfort. In the past centuries, transportation, medicals, education were limited but today we can earn great advanced in these fields for an example people travel a far away places during several or even half an hours by airplane or subway while our ancestors traveled this way in several month. About medicals we see today treatment of so many illness have been discovered additionally so many medicine and vaccine are discovering but in the past people almost died because of incurable sickness.
Second, education issues is more accessible today rather than what was in the past. For example learning English in the past and having academic education was a dream and only wealthy prominent family could have high education but now-days all people in all point of the world can be educated by distance Learning, online learning and so many other education sources which is free. All these help we have educated population with more wisdom to build better life condition.
Finally, in contradict with the first two paragraphs I wanted to clear others facts about people life Chang during recent decades. Drug addiction, traffic, air pollution, water crisis, population increase, job shortage, emotional stress, immorality and cancer are the modern human problems. In the past people had healthier nutrition, they almost ate fresh natural vegetable and fruit or home food but nowadays so many Genetically modified crops (transgenic fruits), fast foods and fatty oils introduced to people which are carcinogenic. Industrial advanced also cause so many factories been founded all over the world which pollute our fresh water sources and aquatic creators such as fishes and Shrimp as human food sources. they transfer carcinogenic agent in food chain and causing many health problems. About spiritual matters, noise Pollution, cold emotional relationships and stress cause many mental illnesses in modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a great way" with adverb for "great"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dition this clear that life had changed in a great way specially in faces of comfort and facil...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...s, long term purposes cause human being try and work harder. First, by growth of scien...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...away places during several or even half an hours while our ancestors traveled this...
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Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'several months'.
Suggestion: several months
...hile our ancestors traveled this way in several month. About medicals we see today treatment ...
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Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many illnesses'.
Suggestion: many illnesses
...t medicals we see today treatment of so many illness have been discovered additionally so ma...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun medicine seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much medicine', 'a good deal of medicine'.
Suggestion: much medicine; a good deal of medicine
...ss have been discovered additionally so many medicine and vaccine are discovering but in the...
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Line 2, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...overed additionally so many medicine and vaccine are discovering but in the past ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this education' or 'these educations'?
Suggestion: this education; these educations
...er education sources which is free. All these education help we have educated population with m...
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Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...adict with two the first two paragraphs i wanted to clear others facts about peop...
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Line 4, column 658, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...atic creators such as fishes, Shrimp and ,... they transfer carcinogenic agent in ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.320754716981 0.229887763892 140% => OK
Verbs: 0.129380053908 0.158761421928 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.132075471698 0.0866891130778 152% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0539083557951 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0242587601078 0.0685040099705 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102425876011 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0431266846361 0.0351676179071 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60727370658 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00539083557951 0.0309702414327 17% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0539083557951 0.0887237588012 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00808625336927 0.0209618222197 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0161725067385 0.0139019557991 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2117.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 337.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28189910979 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40059347181 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293768545994 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210682492582 0.174417080927 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145400593472 0.112833075102 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60727370658 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620178041543 0.524397521467 118% => OK
Word variations: 73.7738425134 59.2087087015 125% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9230769231 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7834355955 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.846153846 120.699889404 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.644075263715 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.2999315225 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 2.24675324675 1.45489161554 154% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167222252782 0.300154397459 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0919051400998 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0683708325562 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534821965797 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134216611566 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728761061444 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280713470234 0.0781384742642 36% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.23567340072 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0307112876769 0.067059652881 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11365675913 0.210909579961 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187664092422 0.0618886996521 30% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.