TPO 111
Teaching has a great influence on our well-being. It can affect our overall progress and prosperity since it has a direct impact on our lives. Therefore, I disagree that teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past more than they are in today’s world. This is because people value education, teachers play a vital role in youngster lives, and teaching one of the hardest jobs.
In the beginning, every parents value and know hoe important is education. In fact, in today’s competitive society, parents assure to get their children a proper education. As an example, people spend their life saving for their child's education fees to make sure they get a better future. Hence, society valued teachers more than the past.
Moreover, educators play a vital role in our children life. Indeed, parents knows the essential place that teachers take in their young life. For instance, not everything children will learn from their parents. Some important aspects and skills they learn them from the instructors such as: team work and problem solving. Therefore, parents appreciate the education staff and knows the critical role they play in their children lives.
Finally, being a teacher is not an easy job. It requires specific skills that not everyone can master them. In fact, the society are well aware about how hard is to be a teacher. Individuals have the choice to choose a career of their interests but to be a teacher is more than just an interest. Teachers must be patience, kind and at the same time strict. Hence, not everyone has these kinds of skills to fit in a teaching job.
In sum, I adamantly believe that people are fully appreciated to teachers and the great jobs they are doing due to the fact that society value education, the vital role that educators play and how hard their job is.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94551282051 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53045227018 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1374500958 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.15 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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