As is known to all, traveling has become a popular way for entertainment, however, where to travel has arouses wide discussion in the public. Some people chooses to travel in their own country because of the cheap cost, while others choose to go far away from their home and take an adventure fearlessly. I will definitely support the latter choice because it can benefit a lot to ourselves.
First of all, I have to admit that travelling in our own country will be safer and cheaper, and we could also find amazing scenes in some places we have never touched. Nonetheless, travelling abroad can offer us more surprising scenes because we can immerse in a totally different culture and experience a fresh new direction. Imagine confronting with a multicultural place. There will be so many different people with different characteristics with the same curiosity. In most circumstances, a country’s charm could be told after we talk to the people there and see its most representative architectures. Just visiting the museum over there could give a brief understanding of the country’s history and the interest of their people, so people who are worrying about the cost there could select the most famous places to visit thus reducing the budget of the expense.
In addition, travelling abroad is an extraordinary opportunity to learn another language or even more languages. Anyone who is stuck in some difficult vocabulary would agree with me about the advantage of staying in the crowd where every one talks to you in this new language. On the other hand, it could release us from boring remembering words and fully rise our interest in this language if we are lucky enough to make some true friends in this trip or even keep their contacts.
What's more, let us return to the reason why we need to travel, the answer is we are eager to relax ourselves from the insipid life. A trip to a place where no one actually know us will be perfect to release ourselves both mentally and physically. Nevertheless, if we stay in the our own country, we cannot avoid of meeting acquaintances because most of people nowadays will choose to travel for a few weeks in their holidays. If you are travelling with your wife or husband sweetly, then suddenly your employer comes up, this scene will be a little awkward to some extent.
In conclusion, due to the above reasons, I greatly recommend to travel abroad because it can not only broaden our horizon, but also enables us to acquire a new language and fully release ourselves to face the following busy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...a multicultural place. There will be so many different people with different characteristics w...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...is trip or even keep their contacts. Whats more, let us return to the reason why w...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...physically. Nevertheless, if we stay in the our own country, we cannot avoid of meeting...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... avoid of meeting acquaintances because most of people nowadays will choose to travel for a fe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85649202733 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81259111686 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53986332574 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5600902499 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.411764706 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8235294118 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248074330675 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793137102861 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042050765013 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139099915911 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506055165096 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.