Travelling is a great and personal experience for everyone. Everyone has their own ideology about travelling. Some people think that it is better to visit places in their own country because they consider it quite inexpensive and feasible. On the other hand many people do not think alike. In my opinion it is healthier to visit excellent places in our country and in foreign countries as well.
Although, we have a lot of spectacular places in India but I would have to concur that there are many other incredible places to visit worldwide also. It would be prejudice to say that India is the only striking country with diverse culture and food. World is full of amazing things and places like America, Australia, Switzerland and many more. I can say this strongly because I got an opportunity last year to go to Switzerland for my honeymoon. Not to mention, it was the most magnificent place that I came across in my entire life. I was astonished to see the natural beauty of the mountains and the technology has even supplemented on to it. I would always be glad that I decided to visit such a grand country and will always cherish the memories associated with it.
In addition, I would like to mention that when a person limits itself only to one country then he/she is actually confining itself to a very small world and also restricting to one’s knowledge. Further, when people visit varied places and come in contact with various people with wide-ranging culture, they indeed are being able to learn more and enhance their knowledge for example Tribal people in Africa are just restrained to their own small world. These people are completely isolated from other parts of the world and thus they have inadequate knowledge which hinders their development. Therefore, I believe that it is always good to go to different place and meet a variety of people.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that we should give priority to our own country first. So, one should inevitably see the important and famous places of it because it is always appreciable to gather information about our own culture and history before gaining information about rest of the world. However, it would be beneficial to visit other beautiful places as well, not just for having fun but also to expand knowledge and interact with different people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...er incredible places to visit worldwide also. It would be prejudice to say that Ind...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.184757505774 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.163972286374 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115473441109 0.0866891130778 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0785219399538 0.046263068375 170% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0900692840647 0.0685040099705 131% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10623556582 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0254041570439 0.0351676179071 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66672295674 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0554272517321 0.0309702414327 179% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0461893764434 0.0887237588012 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0207852193995 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00692840646651 0.0139019557991 50% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2337.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 398.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87185929648 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354271356784 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243718592965 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165829145729 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123115577889 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66672295674 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.6413198709 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9473684211 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3827967766 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.644075263715 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 45.3192277175 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 0.951388888889 1.45489161554 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268567599557 0.300154397459 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125553553502 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0660445813132 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489083180753 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133465448572 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107926437687 0.114077575197 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041159060968 0.0781384742642 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.397232535075 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0328843113363 0.067059652881 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198570496384 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312643796543 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.