TPO-16 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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TPO-16 - Independent Writing Task

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Travelling is one of the most enjoyable part in our lives. This is what people do in vacations. There are many purposes for travelling like visiting friends, family members or some places. There are also different ways for travelling some prefer to travel alone, some other people prefer to travel with tour guide. I certainly agree that travelling with tour guide is more useful for following concerns.

First of all, hiring tour guide is essential for tour of historical or scientific places. In these kind of places guide is needed to get information from reliable resources. Also, it is more convenient for getting information from guide than searching on internet or reading books to get information about that specific place. This can add to person’s knowledge in general and encourage him to read more about the information given by tour guide.

In addition to knowledge that person can get from tour guide, it is more likely to save your time. The main difficulty of a trip is how to schedule and prevent from any time wasting. Sometimes, For example, if some place opens at 11 in morning and we reach there at 9 am there would be waste of time, but guide can helps us and we can save our time by not reaching that place before the time of opening. In other words, trip becomes planned with the help of guide. They exactly know how to create a timetable and arrange a satisfactory travel for adults and children without any time loss.

Furthermore, avoiding from psychology problems is another noticeable reason. When somebody travels in a group not lead by a tour guide, they have to divide duties between group's members. Someone should be responsible for transportation and other one should prepare equipment. Because of these tasks people should feel stressed and pressured. But tour organizers are responsible for all of those mentioned tasks and works when persons travel in a tour. This free task journey would be a great opportunity for individuals to keep away the tension.

In conclusion, without guide one cannot get knowledge about places easily and trip becomes unorganized. That's why I believe that trip led by travel guide helps person to gain more benefits from it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... of historical or scientific places. In these kind of places guide is needed to get inform...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...e would be waste of time, but guide can helps us and we can save our time by not reac...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'satisfactory travel'.
Suggestion: satisfactory travel
...w how to create a timetable and arrange a satisfactory travel for adults and children without any tim...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...es easily and trip becomes unorganized. Thats why I believe that trip led by travel g...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, kind of, first of all, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93548387097 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6280425606 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 36.5684007564 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4545454545 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15680784681 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049914196592 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545031829686 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863072249367 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482472731817 0.0645574589148 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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