TPO-18 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In my opinion the affection of teachers or friends when people are students, depend on many factor and it is not a completely predictable for all situation.
First, affection of friends or teacher depend on the character of that person. A person with a strong spirit try to select a way which help him for successful. Sure friends specially in the school age can affect each other in good way or bad way.
Second, teacher strategy. this is the most important factor that show teacher are more influenced on students or their friends.
Third, now days people, specially in school age are open relation by social net such as telegram, Skype, Facebook, Instagram and ... at these nets students chat with each other and speak about interesting issues which pleasur them

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'many factors'.
Suggestion: many factors
...nds when people are students, depend on many factor and it is not a completely predictable ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... or bad way. Second, teacher strategy. this is the most important factor that show ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 43.0788530466 16% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 52.1666666667 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 446.0 1977.66487455 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 93.0 407.700716846 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79569892473 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.10542279907 4.48103885553 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61778825621 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 212.727598566 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.524837075471 135% => OK
syllable_count: 129.6 618.680645161 21% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5720825929 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120241065947 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668899752796 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847650751507 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978875799037 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100803641832 0.0645574589148 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 86.8835125448 21% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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