In term of whether the American companies should produce the ecocertified woods, the reading and listening are contradictory to each other.
First of all, the writer makes the point that the people in the US don’t trust the advertising so that they will not pay attention to the ecocertification label. However, the professor demonstrates a different idea that in fact the American people trust the advertising made by the independent organization. Therefore, they are likely to buy the ecocertified wood.
What’s more, contrary to the belief in the reading passage that Americans will not buy the ecocertified wood which is more expensive than the normal wood, the lecturer says that the consumers care about the price only when it has a big difference between two competing goods. However, when the price gap is small, people tend to be motivated by other factors like protecting environment.
Finally, the author states that it makes no sense for American companies to pursue ecocertification when they market most of their products in their own country. In contrast, the speaker refutes that, if the American companies do not do this, the foreign companies which produce the ecocertified wood will occupy the US market.
sample2
- TPO-08 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-08 - Integrated Writing Task Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including ki 60
- TPO-03 - Integrated Writing Task Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rem 80
- TPO-07 - Integrated Writing Task In an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices, an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recyclin 66
- TPO-19 - Integrated Writing Task Many consumers ignore commercial advertisements. In response, advertising companies have started using a new tactic, called “buzzing." The advertisers hire people,buzzers,who personally promote (buzz) products to people 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sample2
...fied wood will occupy the US market. sample2
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242290748899 0.261695866417 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.127753303965 0.158904122519 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101321585903 0.0723426182421 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0484581497797 0.0435111971325 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0308370044053 0.0277247811725 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105726872247 0.128828473217 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0176211453744 0.0370669169778 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.99650057257 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0264317180617 0.0208969081088 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.149779735683 0.128158765124 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176211453744 0.0158828679856 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0264317180617 0.0114777025283 230% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1244.0 1645.83664459 76% => OK
No of words: 199.0 271.125827815 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25125628141 6.08160592843 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.04852973271 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371859296482 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281407035176 0.287516216867 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21608040201 0.187439937562 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160804020101 0.113142543107 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99650057257 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587939698492 0.539623497131 109% => OK
Word variations: 55.3580981091 53.8517498576 103% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1111111111 21.7502111507 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1526160302 49.3711431718 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.222222222 132.220823453 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 21.7502111507 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 50.2518146287 50.5018328374 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.76595744681 1.90840788429 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.583415983585 0.549887131256 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.16013215062 0.142949733639 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111795148205 0.0787303798458 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.751141384527 0.631733273073 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17826758566 0.139662658121 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.295969334806 0.266732575781 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12211694459 0.103435571967 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.456016952804 0.414875509568 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0664560784441 0.0530846634433 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.424650192369 0.40443939384 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768054802366 0.0528353158467 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.