TPO 22
Teachers should have an array of interpersonal skills that would help them to teach well. It is known that some teachers share their social of political views with their students which I think it is not a good idea. This is because this behavior might affect the trust between teachers and students, make the class less enjoyable, and teachers might lose their jobs.
Teachers' political or social views might not be the same with some of their students. This will cause some kind of inconvenience between them and might , sometimes, lead to loss the trust between them. Students, as a result, would cast doubt on all information that their teachers share with them. Thus, the pros of letting students know about their teachers political or social views are weigh less than the crons.
Moreover, students might not enjoy the class when their teachers talk about their social or political beliefs. This may happen frequently with young students because politics or social events are not among their intrests. This happened to me when I was in primary school. I remember one of my teachers was alwayas asking us about what we think about the president of Egypt at that time. To be honest, I had no idea about what he was talking about and I intentially made some exicuses to not attend his class. The reason behind that I did enjoy the class and I literally did not learn anything from that class.
Finally, teachers might lose their jobs when they tlak about politics or social events because some of the students would talk with their parents about that. As a result, some parents might report that to the principle especially when one of the parents or both of them have a conflict with the teacher’s opinion. By time, more and more report would come to the school adiminstration and this definitely would make the school to let the teacher go.
All in all, I think teachers should not share their political or social opinions with their students in order to maintain the trust between them, make their classes more enjoyable, and to not receive any warning or lose their job.
- A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child`s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice. 70
- TPO 22 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. 71
- TPO 6 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of inconvenience between them and might , sometimes, lead to loss the trust betwe...
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Line 13, column 96, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...about politics or social events because some of the students would talk with their parents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, moreover, so, thus, well, i think, kind of, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83611111111 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36230114375 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447222222222 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1074786728 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.411764706 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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