TPO 22 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the down of humanity, education plays crucial role in fostering individuals for societies. Some people are off the opinion that teachers as leaders of education can make belifes and though of childern in the right way. While, I subscribe to the view that teachers must not allow to depaect the belife of students by their opinions and their ponts of view. I feel this for two main reasons; in the following paragraphs my reasons will be elaborated on in more detail.
To begin with, I cannot deny the fact that freedon should take seriously in each aspect of life, even teachers can states their opinion freely, however, in young children are very delicate. generally speaking, childern are influenced by their teachers and peers easely. it has several disadvantages such as taking the chance to reaserch and seeking to find their ways, doing not foster by their experiments, and they cannot muture during the long prosess to be adults, to the name but handful, which needs meticoules attention. As a case in point, it evokes on my minde a memory of my school. we had the teacher that she had stricte opinion about political issue, even if my clasmates and I were raised on different familese, we might had diffferent view points and perspective about politices. In hence, it made inflict between parents, students and the teacher. I mean that the more she persis to her view, the more problems she made for students and their families.
Another reason why I beilieve that teacher should not wase the time of classes by indicate their opinion about unrelated stuffs is that students attend to the school for learning academics and studig. Niether do the educaton policies, nor societies demant for raising childern in this aspect. In fact there are several medea and social contarction, which have this responsibily to teach next generations social and political views.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Generally
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: We
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun medea seems to be countable; consider using: 'several '.
Suggestion: several
...ldern in this aspect. In fact there are several medea and social contarction, which have this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, while, i feel, i mean, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97777777778 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56421484724 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593650793651 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1246789909 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206221159979 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672525439624 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426725000432 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139955322215 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00322791520252 0.0645574589148 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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