In today's world, technology makes everything change very quickly. Just yesterday, maybe your business model was going very well, but today it is possibly collapsed. Look at the traditional transportation, taxi, to see my point. Therefore, it is very important to work quickly, risk making mistakes and spend time to correct them than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct which is very unsure in our always changing environment.
First of all, working quickly will help to catch up the speed of changes. As mentioned, everything now is changing so fast that if we are slow, we will be left behind and abandoned. For example, just in my case, I remembered that when I was a University student, I was taught about marketing advertisement by implementing PR, television and newspaper ads. But after my graduation, those marketing methods has been old fashioned, I have to know about digital marketing, how to do SEO and how to use Google Ads which are totally new to me. Therefore, I am put into a situation that studying quickly by practicing and accepting making mistakes to master it or being fired. So I figure out that in this changing world, I have to catch up with new things fast to be survival.
Second, working quickly will also help to lead us to the correct answer. In my opinion, there are no correct answers forever. What is correct today will be wrong tomorrow. Therefore, it is unnecessary to work perfectly to make everything right at once time but instead making everything appropriate and adapt it based on the environment. For example, I used to work on many strategic projects when I worked for a business consulting firm. If in the past, most of the projects of my company were long-term which took around 1-2 years for building up and 2-3 for execution but now it only takes 6-1 years for planning and next several years for operations and adjustment. We cannot say that all plans are correct and good to implement for the long term since there is no such a thing nowadays anymore.
In sum, I believe that working quickly, making mistakes and correcting instantly is more effective than working slowly and hope that everything is correct. Because it not only helps to adopt the changes faster but also brings us to the correcter answers.
- TPO22 - Integrated TOEFL essay 73
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons and 76
- TPO21 – Independent: A/D? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. 73
- TPO-23 - Integrated Writing Task 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80456852792 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73257387522 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55076142132 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6746637538 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6315789474 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28755564499 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924299336714 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101919820321 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1995711209 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853350348606 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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