Nowadays, choosing the suitable or lucrative job is a big challenge. One should take many factors into account when deciding whether to choose a job that is similar to your parents' job or different job. I do not agree that it is better for children to choose similar jobs to their parents' jobs. I will explain the reasons for my stance on the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first consideration when choosing your career is to choose a job that you like it and want to pend the rest of life doing it. Without this condition, you will not have the motivation to excel in your work or even continue in the same career. It likely that you feel bored and sluggish since the work will become a burden instead of being a joy. Hence, choosing a certain job that because your parents have similar one seems unwise choice to me. All the research and the experience of life tells us that to move up from one step to another on the ladder of success, you have to be engrossed completely in your job, otherwise, you will not achieve any noticeable progress in your life. Look at the successful business men or the public celebrities, such as Bill gates. He started his own work at his early age, and he was fully involved in it, as a result he is now one of the richest men in the world. That would not be possible if he just chose his parents job, not the job he loves.
Second, If a young man or woman choose a certain career depending of his or her parents's job, that may lead to make them dependent on their parents. They will expect their parents to help them whenever they have a problem in their work. Moreover, they people around them will relate any success those kids gain in their life to the parents's help. That would create the impression that these young men or women are not efficient or qualified to be trusted. They may be seen as the spoiled kids who were born with a silver spoon in their mouth. To avoid all this possible negative impact, one should seek to build his future in the way he dreams, not to live someone else's dream. All the stories of life that we heard inform us that those who choose their unique path filled with passion and enthusiasm will be able to undergo all the hardships they may encounter.
To recap, everyone must choose his or her own career based on his qualities and inclination that they possess rather than choosing a career to resemble someone else. Live your own dream and be yourself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, thus, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28267116649 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.069106728 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336569176261 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11379174745 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131386472149 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228751914136 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165265602295 0.0645574589148 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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