Human resource management field has brought many theories about what type of job is more suitable for people. Job can provide security to a person or decrease financial concerns or satisfy clerks with enrichment and learning. I believe that secure job is more preferable than satisfying one.
First, many researches has been conducted in sociology in order to discuss about different aspects of job. The most acknowledged philosophy in these days is the pyramid needs. It proves that persons make their decision in life based on importance levels of their demands which starts with basic level and ends to self-fulfillment one. According to that, security should be provided for a person and then satisfaction as psychological wants could be paid attention. So a person should take safe job before a pleasing job.
In other point, people do not choose opportunity which makes them happy after 5 years work experiences and they prefer be in low risk job when they are veteran. A fresh motivated person in first years of working tends to learn and use his skills without any regard to the perish of firing or bad payment but how much he got experienced he would consider about long term contract and his stability in job.
Third, a safe job can supply you job enrichment or personal development resulting satisfaction however inverse situation could not assure you this when you are in margin of danger and low safety of job. Getting pleased with your tasks means you enjoy from projects and it could not happen just when you are calm with future of your job and you are not scared of hearing goodbye from your company.
In conclusion, secure job is enough and necessary condition of satisfying one and they are in sequence of each other and an expert can not miss any step of his career path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd use his skills without any regard to the perish of firing or bad payment but how much h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59138914278 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2972601695 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273603168886 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980932835532 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563516597337 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140537793703 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382282845531 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.