Teaching activity has been respected over the many decades by all persons in the world regardless of any culture or religious view. People have believed teachers are the most important segments in society because they make their children’s character and behavior. However many statements say in recent years this valued task has not been paid attention like past which I agree with that and explain my opinion in following.
First of all, circumstance has been changed not just for educating job but also for many issues which were beloved by human being. Former values which had undeniable position in our traditions and rules removed by new samples as modernity deforms communities and lifestyles in our universe. For example honoring old people has been recommended by all ancestors while in these years young generation may not know anything about this instruction. Many scientists say this is outcome of modern living that persons tend to replace even morality they had inherited from their fathers.
Secondly, teachers are not the only source of our knowledge in contemporary life and persons are not dependent strongly to them. Nowadays there are many learning systems which educate all fields of science without need of any teacher. For instance, we can find our answer to questions in online environments and social media with a click and roaming in blogs and website in contradiction with past that our teachers were single resource to our unanswered enigmas.
In final words, governments altered their policy in looking to the teaching job as the most strategic profession in their countries. In twenty century there is an unchangeable law that schools and educating systems are the most vital occupation which should get the highest salary in comparison with the others. Surprisingly comments have been produced to criticism this idea with raising some scenarios that say what happens if change this old-fashioned strategy. For example some nations invests more on health programs and doctors as a more necessary developmental approach instead of paying the best revenue to the teachers.
In conclusion, It is not the end era of teaching in our world and this duty has been positioned as the most crucial status in many societies like Japan but we can neglect this fact that there is a decline in respecting to this job and nobody knows the right decision about this controversial subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ision about this controversial subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19181585678 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73402850379 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5391591387 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116466548604 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391474917003 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387081546843 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668336623849 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408284827985 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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