Having a job is pretty important aspect for many people in their lives.Securing a job is the first thing in having a job, some people will be pretty content with any job they are going to get, but some don't.Generally, i believe that people should wait for a job that will be more satisfying than securing a job right away when they have the opportunity, particularly if they want to have a long and good career, and be satisfied.
First of all, it's important to consider job satisfaction.These days there are many people doing jobs that they are not satisfied with because of taking the job on the first opportunity they got. For example, i know a guy who is my senior in our college,who had a very good grade in our college and interested in automobiles and had a very good chance at securing a job in automobile company which he is interested in, but he got an opportunity in a consultant company and he accepted the offer.After joining and working in that company, he is not satisfied with the work, due to that his performance has suffered.
In addition to job satisfaction, i think they will be more efficient and excel in their job.There are many people that has very poor performance in their jobs because they don't like doing that job, and they are getting stuck and not getting any promotions.For example, i have done an internship in a company where i met several members,the one's that have taken the job because they liked it are pretty good at their jobs, but those who took the job at the first opportunity not because they like the job has had a pretty bad performance results and are not very efficient.
By way of conclusion, based on the above arguments, i am of the opinion that in the most cases it's more beneficial to people to wait for a job that will be more satisfying than securing a job right away when they have the opportunity.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198895027624 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.17955801105 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911602209945 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0635359116022 0.046263068375 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0718232044199 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116022099448 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0524861878453 0.0351676179071 149% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82435535222 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0193370165746 0.0309702414327 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110497237569 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138121546961 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0303867403315 0.0139019557991 219% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1866.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 337.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53709198813 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.240356083086 0.338922669872 71% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189910979228 0.251872472559 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13649851632 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109792284866 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82435535222 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424332344214 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.357947575 59.2087087015 72% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6684587814 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 67.4 20.5533526081 328% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 138.606781941 48.84282405 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 373.2 120.699889404 309% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.4 20.5533526081 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.6 0.644075263715 248% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.54480286738 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 86.3910979228 45.7405998639 189% => OK
Elegance: 1.16666666667 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366692444645 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.243583755261 0.103427244359 236% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0936196710079 0.0752933317313 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.859548166654 0.497263757937 173% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.214548272756 0.151897553556 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262610694689 0.114077575197 230% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109431439156 0.0781384742642 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388797826144 0.336927656856 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0746761939641 0.067059652881 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297380070005 0.210909579961 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903371247592 0.0618886996521 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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