I disagree with the following statement Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web sites.
Education for children is a very important part in their life. Education is one of the prominent parts of one's life and it is even more important to children. Because children does not know about anything. They are more vulnerable to change than adults. So, children should be taught manners and basic knowledge about things. So, education is very important for the children.
Children can be easily managed because they don't know anything. Parents should be teaching them what to do and what not to do. Now a days parents are indulging more in their work and they are not spending much of their time with their children. The children does not have anyone to spend their time with so they get engaged in playing with cellphone, online games and spending time social networking. These games and social networking is very addictive and interesting. Parents should be taking care of their children from the start and make them like education. If parents can do this then educating children is not that difficult of a task.
The subjects that are taught in the school and the curriculum that is present in the schools does not change and the children now a days find it pretty boring. The teaching methods should change and the subjects present in the textbooks should change for the children to be engaged and make them want to study.
If these two things happen educating children is not a difficult task now-a-days.
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... time with their children. The children does not have anyone to spend their time wit...
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... engaged and make them want to study. If these two things happen educatin...
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...ed and make them want to study. If these two things happen educating child...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23178807947 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.188741721854 0.158761421928 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0695364238411 0.0866891130778 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0827814569536 0.046263068375 179% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0596026490066 0.0685040099705 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105960264901 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0430463576159 0.0351676179071 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45032276091 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.023178807947 0.0309702414327 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0794701986755 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023178807947 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132450331126 0.0139019557991 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1701.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 280.0 408.028673835 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.075 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346428571429 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182142857143 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117857142857 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45032276091 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435714285714 0.524397521467 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.9714873156 59.2087087015 69% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4705882353 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6997119008 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.058823529 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.176470588235 0.644075263715 27% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.54480286738 234% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.4705882353 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.15 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451010072812 0.300154397459 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127787376907 0.103427244359 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.134406539829 0.0752933317313 179% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558761750317 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.239494407158 0.151897553556 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167958048236 0.114077575197 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166915239888 0.0781384742642 214% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.252219129959 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116765066773 0.067059652881 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326906870166 0.210909579961 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237373934731 0.0618886996521 384% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.