There are many factors that have been involved to change parents care of education toward their children. In my opinion, in recent days, parents are less involved in their children's education than they were in the past. This due to continuously change in lifestyle.
The main major factor that mostly considered a crucial part of the lifestyle changes is technology. Nowadays there are many invented technologies that either prevent parents from teaching their children or it takes children away from their parents. I remembered when I was in elementary school, my mother was connected to me and she was reviewing all the lessons that I took in daily bases. At that time, my family did not have much of the enjoyable technologies. Thus, I felt my parents involved in my education life because there wasn't anything that took us away from each other. However, these days, there are many invented technologies and it can be affordable such as smartphones, laptops, computers, video games and more. Now my family has most of the recently mentioned types of technologies which have negatively affect my young brothers in their education. For example, my mother recently bought a smartphone and she is very happy with its enjoyable features. She spends several hours on her new phone which led her to forget asking or even look at what my brothers take in the school. This in return goes to my brothers who are very busy with their video games after they became from the school. Therefore, the bond between parents and their children will be declined with using modern technologies as it will take all of two parts time.
In conclusion, the changes in the lifestyle of people because of inventions have change parents and children connection. This relation is applied to children’s education. It won't be perfect these days because a high percentage of parents and children have been using them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...lved in my education life because there wasnt anything that took us away from each ot...
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Line 2, column 822, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...s of technologies which have negatively affect my young brothers in their education. F...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98738170347 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69576402296 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5032694218 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185117088139 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677677331825 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739101476835 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16156716091 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677247020526 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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