What an important aspect of human beings' lives which plays a prominent role in their prosperities, to a great extent, is education. Although there is a consequence on its indisputable role, the best way of improving the quality of education is still a moot point. Germane to this fact, a question which is the matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether high salaries for universitiy professors is a decisive factor in having a better education. Although some people may be on the belief that it is not effective, I am personally of the conviction that high wages for professors is essential to improve the quality of education for two consipcuous reasons.
One compelling reason giving in favor of this thesis is that it helps professor to focus on their responsibilities and teaching stuends a well as possible. To elucidate more on this issue, it is crystal clear that a high salary result in better life for professors. Therefore, there will be no problems that keep their minds busy, and they can spend all of their time on preparing comprehensive lectures for their classes.
Another reason which cannot go unnoticed is that by paying much money to professors, universities might have the opportunitiy to have well-equipped classes. To shed some light on this premise, it is worth pointing out that scine professors could make a huge amount of money by teaching, they would try to improve their work conditions too. This means that it is likely that professors try to spend money on getting access to required implements for a better teaching.
By way of conclusion, I am personally one of the proponents who cites a clear bias in favor of the idea that high salaries for university professors will result in a higher quality of education. To recapitulat the reasons, not only will help professor to focus on thier job, but also may result in having better classes. Due to the aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I recommend that every university pasy as high as possible wages to its professores.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224598930481 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.152406417112 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106951871658 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0320855614973 0.046263068375 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.048128342246 0.0685040099705 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136363636364 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0347593582888 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99855609301 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401069518717 0.0309702414327 130% => OK
Particles: 0.00267379679144 0.00188951952338 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.104278074866 0.0887237588012 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0267379679144 0.0209618222197 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0213903743316 0.0139019557991 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2043.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 343.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95626822157 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332361516035 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250728862974 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212827988338 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151603498542 0.112833075102 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99855609301 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524781341108 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 55.7222703877 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 26.3846153846 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4294864814 48.84282405 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.153846154 120.699889404 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 51.457501682 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.70114942529 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283219023969 0.300154397459 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127484282931 0.103427244359 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0646665621835 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.62208957206 0.497263757937 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0788184194625 0.151897553556 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133320323247 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453551458472 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295453284436 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0521910602139 0.067059652881 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198380842311 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533842335526 0.0618886996521 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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