Certainly, I agree that universities should pay more money to the professors to enhance the quality of education. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The descriptions go as follows.
First of all, it can contribute professors to be up to date with modern advancements. Nowadays, the world changes very quickly and people now can see tremendous enhancements in different field of science and engineering including electronic, computer, chemistry, as well as mechanic. Paying more money to the university instructors gives them opportunity to register and attend to different instructive conferences and workshops in order to be familiar with new technical methods and inventions. Moreover, professors can use this money to order several useful books and movies to reach to a profound understanding about the materials that they need to cover in the course, and therefore this should assist universities to improve the performance and efficiency of the educational process.
Furthermore, serving professors to relieve stress or keep away the pressure is another noticeable support. Almost all professors suffer lots of tension and anxiety from students and academic environments. Sometimes, they ought to either explain a topic for long hours or review several students’ essay in the classrooms. This money can help professors to go to the beach and enjoy from different amusements such as swimming, scuba diving, or walking on the sand stones to be relax and as a consequence this would whet their appetite to concentrate on teaching task.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by some persons who oppose to pay more money to the university professors. Mainly, this money can be used to purchase either new tables for the libraries or functional tools for the labs in order to improve education quality. However, still I affirm that the universities should pay more money to the professors. For instance, these days, the governments pass rules to maintain extra resources or funds for all universities to buy those mentioned stuffs.
Due to aforementioned ground, I think that all people should bear in mind that it is necessary to give university professors more money to raise education efficacy. Participating of keeping up with new knowledge and helping professors to avoid from stress are two prime and conspicuous factors that offer high quality of education.
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Essay evaluation report
gives them opportunity to
gives them the opportunities to
to be relax
to relax
to be relaxing
flaws:
need more subClauses starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'.
some sentences are too long. for example:
Moreover, professors can use this money to order several useful books and movies to reach to a profound understanding about the materials that they need to cover in the course, and therefore this should assist universities to improve the performance and efficiency of the educational process.
This money can help professors to go to the beach and enjoy from different amusements such as swimming, scuba diving, or walking on the sand stones to be relax and as a consequence this would whet their appetite to concentrate on teaching task.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1978 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.233 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.979 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 68 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.48 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... efficiency of the educational process. Furthermore, serving professors to relie...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'i think', 'such as', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271634615385 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.149038461538 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0793269230769 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408653846154 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0216346153846 0.0685040099705 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0913461538462 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0240384615385 0.0351676179071 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10358053611 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0721153846154 0.0309702414327 233% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00480769230769 0.00188951952338 254% => OK
Determiners: 0.0889423076923 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0288461538462 0.0209618222197 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00480769230769 0.0139019557991 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2412.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 378.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.38095238095 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375661375661 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314814814815 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240740740741 0.174417080927 138% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.201058201058 0.112833075102 178% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10358053611 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566137566138 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 64.8343679797 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2352941176 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2793836052 48.84282405 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.882352941 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.644075263715 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.7167755991 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.82954545455 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436100178622 0.300154397459 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0815914390783 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0573485867898 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.577825797192 0.497263757937 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134349092695 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183983444445 0.114077575197 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857102934817 0.0781384742642 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393298264164 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0793474889138 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301958450011 0.210909579961 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037968984197 0.0618886996521 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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