Today, most of the workers are working five days a week and getting two days off in all industrial area like factories, textile mills, health institutes and so on. Like coin has two ends, this concept working hours also has merits and demerits among that benefits of working for three days has more demerits when compare with the merits. So, I want to support the five days working is better than the three days working hours.
First of all, we are all habituated to five days work from long age, so it is difficult to adjust to the new way of doing the works. For example, I am working for eight hours day suddenly if the employer asking me to work for ten hours a day it very difficult to do that even though they give extra two days off. It causes more pressure for my job I may have the chance of something due to excessive pressure, further, it spoil my health like mental stress and lack of communication with my family.
Secondly, when the company plans to like that, then they are supposed to hire large infrastructure in order company the more workers, these processes causes undue stress to employer such cost and expenditure. For example, if the company rent a large building for the purposes it cost somewhere around millions of dollar per years and they have to spend huge for the other expenditure.
Thirdly, already the american unemployment rate increased from four percent to six percent, when this is implemented then there will be lots of unemployed people those who graduated from college will have the negative consequences from this plan. And that leads economical problems in the country which very bad at present condition.
Fourthly, work efficiency will be reduced by doing so because of over stress on complete the task within given time that makes lots of mistake while make the products. For example, when company asks to make 100 papers correction instead of 60 papers then there is more chance of making mistake rather than doing right. Hence, the productivity of workers will goes down without any doubt.
Finally, even though workers can find out some leisure time and make them very fresh for the work. The tendency of doing hard work become very less because once they adopt to that kinds of situations it is very difficult to bring back them to normal potential capacity which make the workers very lazy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Today, most of the workers are working five days a w...
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...rk for ten hours a day it very difficult to do that even though they give extra t...
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...city which make the workers very lazy.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240990990991 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.146396396396 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0743243243243 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0698198198198 0.046263068375 151% => OK
Pronouns: 0.045045045045 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132882882883 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0405405405405 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37548398889 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036036036036 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0045045045045 0.00188951952338 238% => OK
Determiners: 0.0878378378378 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0135135135135 0.0209618222197 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018018018018 0.0139019557991 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2376.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 409.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80929095355 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303178484108 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222493887531 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139364303178 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.078239608802 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37548398889 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547677261614 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.0265214927 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 27.2666666667 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7047281453 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.4 120.699889404 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2666666667 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.54480286738 289% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.5160554197 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.58620689655 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273509545751 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122943694822 0.103427244359 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0776386736417 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.64263379536 0.497263757937 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122160388828 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111207358724 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652481813224 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.262960662494 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0718601098566 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152568787806 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764845900754 0.0618886996521 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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