There has been much discussion concerning whether three days workweek is more joyful then five days or not. People are so different and they tend to percept differently. Some of them prefer to have a longer workday and then have a longer weekend, other more like shorter workweeks instead. In my consideration, people will more enjoy they work if they work five days a week for shorter hours. I will explain my position by providing some examples.
At the first place, people are able to concentrate fully on the tast only for four hours per day. In other words, the work process will be more productive, if person works for shorter hours per day. Speaking personally, I had an experience of working by the different timetables. Therefore, I daresay while I was working for shorter hours, I was able to do more assignments and also spent more quality time at work. On the other hand, long work day made me feel frustrated, and most of the time I was spending seeping coffee on the coffee point. That’s way, a five days workweek is preferable for our emotional conditions and better productivity.
Secondly, no doubts that three days workweek gives you an advantage of having more free time. But on the other hand, I suppose, it is harder to come back to the working routine, when you adjust to the lond weekends. I eager to present a fact from my experience as an obvious example of this. On of my colleagues had a four days workweek, and at the begining It seemed to him as a big privialege over other people that he has a chance to relax more at home far away from the work duties. But, at the end, he was feeling so frustrating during the weekends, so he barely wanted to come back to job. As expected, he wasn’t able to do his obligations properly, and it caused a lot of problems for him. In the light of the above, I suppose that it is harder to enjoy your work and adjust to it, when you spend most of the time having a weekend.
To wrap up, I believe that all people are different, and it’s important to understand what timetable suits better for you. In my opinion, shorter hours can make you more productive and more disiplined during a week.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ther three days workweek is more joyful then five days or not. People are so differe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, i suppose, no doubt, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53944020356 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59879539012 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516539440204 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0114561459 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358659745701 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106431085425 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754447320757 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219697824273 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257298160935 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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