Tpo 31 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
The issue of whether people now are less pleasant and satisfied with their lives compare with the past aroused much controversy among people of different ages and different perspectives. Definitely, some people if were asked would agree with the statement that nowadays, people are less happy and satisfied with their life than the past, while others have a negative attitude toward this point of view. As far as I am concerned, I am in agreement with the latter group. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to support my view.
The first vital point to be mentioned is that in the modern world people’s income escalating considerably, as they get paid more salary and access to the variety of employment opportunities. In the past, most the people worked as labors and peasants that did not get paid all that much. They had numerous difficulties to satisfy their daily necessities. How can people lead a happy life, when they could not make enough money to buy sufficient food and clothes for themselves and their children. While today, people can earn enough money to support their families, this is because every country establishes laws to protect workers’ rights by determining minimum wages in their constitution to prevent from low salary.
In approaching this issue, apart from the reason given above, another reason that deserves some words is that technological advancement makes people’s lives more convenient in comparison to the past that lead to more enjoyment opportunities. For example, the Internet makes the possibility for people to communicate with their friends and families around the world. This way assist them do not feel homesick when they are far from home. furthermore, many brilliant inventions help them to do their household chores easy, for instance, kitchen appliances such as dishwasher, microwave, vacuumed help them to save their time for accomplishing the meaningful task like watching a movie, reading a book, and spending time with their families.
Finally, with medical advancement, nowadays, doctors can cure many past incurable diseases and also, help people to get rid of some problems in their appearance trough beauty surgeries. As a result, people health improve and these surgeries boost people confidence which is essential for a delightful life.
By the way of conclusion, based on the arguments that explored above, I am of the opinion that people now lead more happy lives than the past because they make more money and improve their living standard. In addition, advanced technology leads to convenience life and accessing to the advancement of medical care heal their disease and solve their beauty problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...l homesick when they are far from home. furthermore, many brilliant inventions help them to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23963133641 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81112034384 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541474654378 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9669164381 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.764705882 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5294117647 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373924913694 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116988985267 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099007084109 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212349830638 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111800145911 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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