Not surprisingly, no century witnessed more progress in technology than the 20th century did. Due to this trend, different aspects of people's daily life have been undergone considerable changes, and meanwhile, it has been argued that whether these fast changes have made people more satisfied or not. While I believe it can not be generalized to all cases, I tend to agree on its positive consequences based on the following concerns.
The first point to support such a view is that the advent of the internet has provided a wide range of facilities which change people's lifestyle to be more appealing. To begin with, the social circle has developed drastically. In the past, people's communication with their friends were not limited to the geographical distance or physical barrier. However, the convoluted application, like Skype or Whatsapp, facilitate telecommunications and as an example, abroad students can easily keep in touch with their families or motherland's friends via sending them their images and voices. Furthermore, people can meet their different requires by phones or online sites without even living their houses or offices. In fact, most days' financial transaction, for instance, have become electronically. In essence, people's convenient lifestyle can bring them joy by having involved them in facetious activities.
Apart from this, the advance in transportation system has played a critical role in producing extra time for people's entertainment affairs. Firstly, compared to the past, fast and convenient transporting system is considered as a remarkable achievement. In fact, in those cases which online activities can not be responsible, and instead face to face communication is required, aviation agencies or well-equipped private car have made it easier to break long-time travels. In addition, advances in the metros and public transportation cut down the amount of time for commuting between different remote distances. As a result, people have more leisure time to take part in joyful terms.
On the negative side, it should be noted that some by-products of these advances might be carefully examined. The advent of the internet has caused people to have longer employees' commitment. Needless to say, their responsibilities are not now limited to their presence in their offices as they are more accessible by cellphones and other communication devices like a fax. Furthermore, the fast pace of life might not allow people to adapt themselves to high rates of changes which have exposed them on the serious mental or psychological distress. Another factor makes it worse is that having been spent a considerable amount of time in virtue environment has made people be isolated and indifference to the surrounding area
From what have been discussed, different aspects of the lifestyle changes have been considered and its positive aftermath outnumbers its negative one. As it was mentioned, not only can people enjoy from longer leisure time but also their ways of life become more convenient as it might more satisfactory. However, more involvement in these advances might cause disorder, especially mental one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ternet has caused people to have longer employees commitment. Needless to say, their resp...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24358974359 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.175824175824 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970695970696 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0604395604396 0.046263068375 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0494505494505 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111721611722 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0714285714286 0.0351676179071 203% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.06308853046 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311355311355 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0695970695971 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201465201465 0.0209618222197 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00732600732601 0.0139019557991 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3158.0 2387.08602151 132% => OK
No of words: 493.0 408.028673835 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40567951318 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399594320487 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306288032454 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237322515213 0.174417080927 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.168356997972 0.112833075102 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06308853046 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535496957404 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 64.6081049481 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4090909091 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2253303369 48.84282405 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.545454545 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4090909091 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.644075263715 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.0378941545 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.49358974359 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300441514027 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0839962970169 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0521021669592 0.0752933317313 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464080140411 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.105759924384 0.151897553556 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110313053602 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598104621989 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302192742836 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0537391864339 0.067059652881 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189695423062 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803943255648 0.0618886996521 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.