TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to
There is no doubt that today, people' life is complex than that of past. This brings up a controversial question concerning with the lifestyle of people: Is it true that currently individuals more satisfied with their lives? In my perspective, I think that the advancement in the world make it possible for people to live happier. The reasons behind this viewpoint are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first thing that immediately comes to mind is that people nowadays have better medical care. In fact, when a person has a diseases he or she able to cure his or her ailment, as there are a lot of hospital all around the world. Medical scientists could retreat great deal of diseases that were in the last decades untreatable. For instance, in the past curing chronicle ailment such cancer was impossible, while individuals scientists could cure such ailments with advanced devices. Additionally, currently, people could get assistance from not only private organization but also from government for paying their medical expense. However, in the past, there were a few people who could afford to pay medical expenses and other patients died from diseases, as a result, people disappointed when they not able to treat their diseases . Therefore, a good medical care cause people to have happier life, since they are able to retreat their ailment.
The second and important reason that support my standpoint is that people spend more time for leisure activities. In fact, according to a research in the scientific institute, people work much less time in comparison with workers in the past, whereas workers gain more salaries for the time they work. Moreover, people with the progress of economy are able to spend money on traveling to other counties and visit anural environment as well as tourism attractions, which in turn makes them to refresh mood and release stress. Hence, people feel happy because they involve in the leisure activities.
Last but not least, individuals eat healthy food. With the advancement of technology, humankind are better access to healthy fruits, which people obtain nutrition and vitamins. Individuals eat these fruit to become physically healthy. The reason for the healthful foods are storing food in the favorable conditions where fruits as well as other eatable product can be eaten in the future. For instance, there is a device that was invented in the last a few years ago and people can store fruits in it, namely refrigerator. However, in the past, not only the foods were rare, but also if someone could find something to eat it was spoiled. So, as you can see, availability of healthy foods is another reason that people now are more satisfy with lives.
In conclusion, according the above-mentioned factors, I contend that humankinds have a desirable live because they have access to medical care, healthy food and they can dedicate more time for enjoyment. Do you believe in my opinion or not? Think about the aforementioned justifications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a disease' or simply 'diseases'?
Suggestion: a disease; diseases
...edical care. In fact, when a person has a diseases he or she able to cure his or her ailme...
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Line 2, column 849, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...en they not able to treat their diseases . Therefore, a good medical care cause pe...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...isure activities. In fact, according to a research in the scientific institute, people wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08467741935 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75108656025 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522177419355 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8709374285 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.88 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.84 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246394217526 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689197232444 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053075291255 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136396861463 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542662215426 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.