Nowadays due to more population there has been great change in the world.People are becoming more innovative and creative and are becoming happy and satisfied.I agree for people being more happy and satisfied with the changing world with the statement, mainly because of two reasons which i will explore in the following passage.
First,in today's world we can see mainly infrastructure and technology which are rapidly inventing which make people's like much more easier and convenient.Lets take example of mobile,can we imagine our life without mobile? And the answer is no because without mobile people are blind and deaf.It has connected people through the world.People sitting in one corner of the country can talk face to face with people of other country without any difficulties.Development of vehicles helps people to move from one place to another place for different propose.Due to innovation people are able to use different products which makes their life easier and satisfy.In previous centuries people used to do work by their own hand which takes more time and even makes people feel monotonous but today all works are done by the help of computer and other technologies.
Second,due to more discoveries and inventions one country can have good and profitable trade relations between different countries in the world.Business and economic aspect of the country is also being affected and covers the broad aspect.Because of changing world people should not take stress for their education,health,for their entertainment and banking facilities as well.Internet facilities have played more and more important role in human life as all the necessary information about place,county,company,products are available in the internet so that people can purchase anything by sitting on their own home even delivery services is also at their door which makes them more happy and more satisfied than people of the past.So i think these are some reasons to agree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33249342229 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 20.1344086022 387% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.711231767 48.9658058833 469% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 419.25 100.406767564 418% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.0 20.6045352989 379% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.45110844103 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268352190171 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176372110768 0.076458572812 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080356059737 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21234603264 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500512162138 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.9 11.7677419355 365% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.15 58.1214874552 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 10.1575268817 344% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.01818996416 138% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.0537634409 330% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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