TPO 35 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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TPO-35 - Independent Writing Task

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Shafayet on Tue, 10/10/2017 - 06:27

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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 43.0788530466 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 52.1666666667 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 18.0 1977.66487455 1% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 4.0 407.700716846 1% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.41421356237 4.48103885553 32% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 0.866025403784 2.67179642975 32% => Word_Length_SD is low.
Unique words: 4.0 212.727598566 2% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.524837075471 191% => OK
syllable_count: 5.4 618.680645161 1% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 4.0 20.1344086022 20% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 18.0 100.406767564 18% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 4.0 20.6045352989 19% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.45110844103 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0609722954552 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609722954552 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609722954552 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 1.8 11.7677419355 15% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.34 58.1214874552 145% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 10.1575268817 25% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 2.9 10.9000537634 27% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 1.0 86.8835125448 1% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 1.0 10.002688172 10% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 3.6 10.0537634409 36% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 3.0 10.247311828 29% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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