The education system, as we all definitely approve and no one is able to deny, plays an undeniably crucial role in every aspect of every person’s life in today's societies. The teachers are the main and the principal element in the education systems. Some people think the teachers in the today world are respected less rather than previous. On the other hand, others disagree. I extremely disagree and I believe that teachers nowadays have remarkably higher social degree because of three reasons.
First, the teachers in modern schools are more educated and they know state of art theories of education so the student respect them more and can create more effective relationship with them. For example, when I studied in high school my history teacher was graduated from one of the most reputed university of my country and he had a vast knowledge of both history and education system. All of the students in the class were comfortable with him and consulted with him in every problem that they were encountered. This experience taught me that educated teachers have outstanding performance.
Second, the well-known schools try to hire the most famous teachers in every field and because of that many students hope to pass the challenging exams to be qualified as a student of these type of schools and study under the guidance of these type of teachers. For instance, our graduate school had a completely difficult entrance test and only one from the ten persons could be passed it. In result, students of the school knew value of this opportunity and tried to contact with teacher in an effective manner and they grateful for teachers.
Third, as the statistic results show the income of the teachers across the world has increased significantly in the two recent decays. In my society twenty years ago most of the teachers had a large amount of problem to deal with their life. They even couldn't afford a medium size home. However, today, the teachers can easily attain home and their salary is the one of the highest salary. As the result, more people decide to work as teacher and the teacher are more satisfied and delighted. This change of improvement of economic situation could be considered as an example of advancement in the social rank of teachers.
In nutshell, as some oppose, the teachers are respected and valued more than former. Not only do they have more income, but also they can provide reputation for schools. Furthermore, the teachers are graduated from universities so the students can count on them to guide them more and more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...e of both history and education system. All of the students in the class were comfortable ...
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Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective manner" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...unity and tried to contact with teacher in an effective manner and they grateful for teachers. Thi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...blem to deal with their life. They even couldnt afford a medium size home. However, tod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94457274827 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6189600465 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517321016166 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6804677639 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.952380952 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17321631775 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569464129089 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442495116916 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104405410163 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440100013042 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.