Teachers play crutial role in development of a personality of every human being. Moreover, most of the children choose their role model between school’s teachers. Morden soceity value enough the labor of teacher and understand the importance of it. Speaking personally, I disagree with the statement that the teacher’s labor isn’t appreciated enough, and I will reinforce my point of view by providing several examples.
First of all, most of the developmented countries increase the teacher’s salary. Just to mention a novel russian policy which supports young teachers and gives them an opportunity to participate in international practice or study abroad. Moreover, government understands the most significant factor, which influence on the improvement of the education, is the qualified teachers. Therefore, by orginising this international practice or by priasing the best teacher, the govenment brings tremendous benefit the the development of teacher’s education.
In the second place, previously, the education system was different. No doubts, if we are talking about Russia, that the education was better in some ways, but it doesn’t mean that teachers was more valued by society. In order to see this point clearly, I will give a good example from my personal experience. When I was exchanging the school experince wih my mother, she told that during her school years a lot of teachers had left their jobs because of the principal or parents pressure. This pressure was because of the misunderstanding between a student and a teacher which led to the conflict. In the light of the above, I daresay that the same occasions are presented in the nowadays schools. However, I suppose that today students became more tolerate concerning their demeanor.
Finally, there are a numerous people aroud me who admire their teachers and still visit them every year at the school. Likewise, I have a good tradition to visit my chemistry teacher every summer holiday. I ween that the future students will keep this tradition alive and will keep in tougch with their teachers as well.
To recapitulate, there are a lot of obvious example of how different people appreciated and valued their teachers. I believe that no matter what year is it, people still would be respecful the their teachers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...the govenment brings tremendous benefit the the development of teacher's education...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...the govenment brings tremendous benefit the the development of teacher's education...
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Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
... is it, people still would be respecful the their teachers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, well, i suppose, no doubt, talking about, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33423913043 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03059067772 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567934782609 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2404242313 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.15 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118631587547 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363863446716 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292574949895 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069403696631 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184871586804 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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