There has beem much discussion revolving around the topic of whether enourmous quantity of information in the internet influence good on people or not. In my consideration, tramendous terrabytes of information is hard to analyze even for computer niether for people. I will explain my position providing the examples to support my point of view.
First of all, internet sometimes isn’t the right place for correct information. My university life was brimming with the examples of the bad consequences of getting information from the internet. Once I was trying to find an answer on one question occured while a was working in the laboratory. I started to look for it in the differnent internet communities and web pages, connected with the exect topic. I spent almost two hours on it and didn’t get any positive result. Finally, my roommate suggested my to go to the library and look for the particular book, and it helped my to find the righ answer. Therefore, sometimes internet isn’t the right place for browsing for appropriate information.
Secondly, Person could be easily distracted by something else during the surfing in the internet. I suppose that because there are enormous number of advertisements and commercials on every internet pages. Usually this ADs and consumer orienteted, because you can see commercials of the products which you previosly tended to purchase. Browser can memorize it and past the ADs on web sites in the future.
Finally, It is challenging to look for valualbe information. You have to look through a lot of web pages, use different web resourses to find the right information. Even if you have found it, it wouldn’t mean that this information correct because it wouldn’t be supported by person who has an autority in this particular subject. Therefore, it is unsave to make your decisions based on the information found in the internet.
To wrap up, I suppose that looking for valuable information in the internet could be really challenging and frustrating. I hope that the examples given above have sufficiently expressed my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... getting information from the internet. Once I was trying to find an answer on one q...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: A_WAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
... answer on one question occured while a was working in the laboratory. I started to...
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Line 8, column 28, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: looking
... future. Finally, It is challenging to look for valualbe information. You have to l...
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Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...formation. Even if you have found it, it wouldn't mean that this information...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i suppose, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20234604106 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07547885503 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527859237537 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8170810834 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.7 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180624578536 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530854568855 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04107640881 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994315792293 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252273874919 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.