TPO 42 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People hold different attitudes towards how to pursue their career. While some employees prefer doing diverse types of tasks, I give my vote to the viewpoint of performing the same operation every day. There are 2 reasons for my view which will be explored in the following essay.
First of all, a worker certainly gains enormous benefits from his adeptness as it greatly contributes to the escalation of goods´ productivity and quality. As a result, he is likely rewarded with a promotion or a pay rise which plays an important role in his happiness. For example, there are a limited number of workers capable of drawing two straight coach-lines on a Rolls-Royce car. As such, they are offered substantially high salaries and a variety of perks from the car manufacturer. Another example is experienced workers in Lexus automobile company who are called Takumi in Japanese. They are considered valuable assets of the company, gaining respects from their management and other employees thanks to their unique abilities to assemble the engines of Lexus cars.
Secondly, people may feel uncomfortable being the apprentice of all the jobs they are responsible for and being supervised by their peers all the time. When one participates in a wide range of tasks, he does not excel in any of them thus becoming a trivial worker who needs incessant supports or instructions from others. The situation is even worse when an elder member is supervised by a younger colleague. The old saying ¨a rolling stone gathers no moss¨ best describes my experience. The boss in my previous company assigned me many different tasks like administration, sales. Therefore, I maintained my entry level while my colleague with the same background was promoted to a management position thanks to the fact that he is adept in a specific duty. I was too upset to stay there for long and moved to my current company where I am allowed to concentrate on the sales side. This aspect is one of the factors which are to blame for my satisfaction at work.
In conclusion, I understand why some people are in favor of executing various tasks but those above-mentioned reasons put weight to my view that doing similar assignments is more advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gathers'' or 'gather's'?
Suggestion: gathers'; gather's
...league. The old saying ¨a rolling stone gathers no moss¨ best describes my experience. ...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... no moss¨ best describes my experience. The boss in my previous company assigned me...
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Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...boss in my previous company assigned me many different tasks like administration, sales. There...
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Line 5, column 765, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to upset'?
Suggestion: to upset
...t he is adept in a specific duty. I was too upset to stay there for long and moved to my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00806451613 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95061262601 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1225125427 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181748772672 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464110501641 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352465623503 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107393334836 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244322426882 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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