We have to admit that similar tasks are comfortable to everyone, however, I believed that people will feel more satisfied when they need to cope with different types of tasks.
Compared with similar tasks, different types of tasks are more challenging to everyone. To solve those tasks, we should persuade ourselves to escape from comfort zone and learn variety kinds of things. The process of solving different types of tasks may be full of pain, but our comfort zone will be enlarged by this way. People who have been exposed to a wide range of learning experiences will be more candidate in their future career, so that they will have higher chance to promote and gain more profit in the future.
As a student major in computer science, I feel very exciting to face with different types of tasks, some of my friends think that a good programmer only needs to write lucid code to solve specific problem, but I do not think so. Similar tasks will not make a good programmer satisfied. A good programmer should be curious about the world, and they will try do learn a variety range of new technics and use different ways to solve problems, it is unreasonable for them to do similar tasks all day and feel satisfied.
When you do a tasks thousands of time, you will eventually feel so bored about your job. I have meet many taxi drivers who does not like his job and complain about sitting all day long in a small car, some people may think that a job with similar tasks will be easy to handle so that they will be more energetic in their leisure time. Just take taxi drivers as an example, it is obvious that you will be more experienced when you drive more and more routes, but after sitting eight or more hours in a small area without enough exercises, most of the people will feel tired and will absolutely gain no satisfaction from the job.
In conclusion, a job with different types of tasks will make people more satisfied than a job with similar tasks, people who are good at coping with different types of tasks have higher probability to promote and less probability to get bored with their job.
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 60
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 78
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 70
- TPO-40 - Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...leisure time. Just take taxi drivers as a example, it is obvious that you will be...
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Line 7, column 538, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... a small area without enough exercises, most of people will feel tiered and will absolutely ga...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'i feel', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218673218673 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.17199017199 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125307125307 0.0866891130778 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.041769041769 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0589680589681 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12285012285 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.027027027027 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37422905455 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.039312039312 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0565110565111 0.0887237588012 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.041769041769 0.0209618222197 199% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.014742014742 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2109.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 377.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59416445623 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.26525198939 0.338922669872 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201591511936 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.124668435013 0.174417080927 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0875331564987 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37422905455 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453580901857 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.4177636991 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 31.4166666667 20.5533526081 153% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8930719241 48.84282405 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.75 120.699889404 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4166666667 20.5533526081 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 51.5758178603 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.35135135135 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394554665639 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.185155953978 0.103427244359 179% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0942952192162 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.659300783074 0.497263757937 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188701571736 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193223073794 0.114077575197 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797093724089 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.345978023363 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750276807056 0.067059652881 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273874576524 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563399871471 0.0618886996521 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.