Various debate sessions have been organised worldwide by non governmental organisations regarding how parents spend their time with children, whether it be playing some games with them or assisting them their day-to-day academic activities. No doubt that good parenting is the most crucial form of teaching, playing a very important role in childrens life to become a good sensible, and responsible citizen.
In this modern era, parents in their busy schedule find it hard to take out some time for their kids but still, whatever spare time they get, they manage it to spend it with their children wisely. Sports and playing various other games is an essential key source to a healthy and a happy life but still, the academics cannot be ignored and parents do have to look into the progress their kid in this field as well. Some reasons that asserts the idea have been mentioned below.
First, in this technological century children need to be focused and attentive on how to use it wisely for the betterment of their future. For instance, they using internet can be used for playing games can be used adversly for cyber crime or sensored content in their juvenile. Thereby, leading them into wrong and a bad company instead of getting them good grades in their school.
Secondly, kids spend most of their time with their friends like playing video games, some sport, discussing things, sharing key concepts, new games and many other things while in the age of a teenage. Due to which they spend very less time in their studies, which is more important. Thereby, making responsibility of parents more severe and serious towards children. And, parents being the first teacher for kids play the role of vital essance in their life.
To recapitualte the fact of the idea in one line, all I could say is that parents are equally important as life is in one's lifetime and best friend to be lived with a good understanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86018237082 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50049098568 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55623100304 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7320078092 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308946120801 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105110087554 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598373456626 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167274247172 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693747725753 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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