Usually the famous entertainer and athletes are expert of their own field of performance. Being celebrity gives them certain position of importance in society. People in different age groups might perceive, the influence from such celebrities differently. In my view the opinions of entertainers and athletes hold more importance to younger people than older people on three accounts.
First, Since young people are usually more active in activities considered lively and hence they have more exposures to entertainers and athletes than older people. In addition, younger people tend to have friend circle which is also exposed to activities of entertainer and athletes. Generally the discussions among younger people, largely centered around themes such as entertainment, sports etc. Whereas Older people are not much interested in such activities. However, older people do read newspapers and journals, sometimes watch TV too. Even though they are not much influenced by such celebrities as much as younger people do.
Secondly, older people have vast experiences of practical life. They have gone through practically every phase of life to understand worldly matters comprehensively and on basis of that older people develop their opinion. When they were young they could have been influenced but after maturity of so many years, older people does not highly regard the opinions of entertainer and athletes. On the other hand, younger are still at an age where they have to learn a lot of things and develop their opinions. So, there is a chance that they may give greater importance to the opinions of celebrities.
Finally, Older people being knowledgeable and learned, they can gauge the depth of the opinions and ideas expressed by anyone, not only celebrities. Hence they will evaluate what is being said and in which context it is said. Based on that evaluation they will attach importance to the opinion of celebrity. Whereas, younger people sometimes gets affected by flashy nature of sensational opinions or due to mere personality of celebrities.
Hence in my view based on above arguments it can be concluded that, older people have more knowledge, practical learning to evaluate the opinions and based on that attach importance to opinion. Whereas, younger people can give more importance to opinions of entertainers and athletes based on their personalities and performances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s and journals, sometimes watch TV too. Even though they are not much influenced by such ce...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ressed by anyone, not only celebrities. Hence they will evaluate what is being said a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... to mere personality of celebrities. Hence in my view based on above arguments it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, in addition, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39361702128 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86841733665 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502659574468 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.879653517 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333565227917 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11206759927 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540197628353 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201022414099 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350429315929 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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