The question being asked is if it is Important to be informed about the events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. This question is important because information is the base of improvement and staying without being informed can be really penalizing. I do agree with the above statement that it is necessary to know about issues taken place around the world even though they can affect our daily life. I support this for three reasons which I would flourish in the lines below.
Firstly, staying without an idea of what is taken place around you can be drastic for your safe. For example, two years ago I traveled to Egypt for holidays without being aware of the situation of that country. I thought everything was well there, that there was peace. Unfortunately for me, at the exact we arrived at the airport I realized I did a great mistake to go there. People were fighting, gamblers and every thing concerning it were there. If I was regularly listening to informations, i could not be in that trap. So for this reason, I think being aware is really essential.
Also, knowing what is happening in the world is important because you can get an information that you can benefit from it. Some few years ago there was a type of game or lottery that Americans opened which enable anyone who gained it to dwell in America. Even thought that game maked people to be qwerelling, it was an opportunity to win a wonderful trip without yourself paying anything. So if someone doesn't get informations, he would never have the chance to participate in this type of game. From this view, I agree that being informed is very very important even if the information hurts.
Lastly, getting aware of events is necessary because it permits an individual to stay online with the activities taken place in the world. It is of important to remain fit with our community, not to have old informations. It would one day be beneficial for someone rather than to remain uninformed.
Finally for all the above reasons, I think it is important to know about events happening around the world even if they hurt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 496, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...as regularly listening to informations, i could not be in that trap. So for this ...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...yourself paying anything. So if someone doesnt get informations, he would never have t...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: very
...is view, I agree that being informed is very very important even if the information hurts...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...one rather than to remain uninformed. Finally for all the above reasons, I think it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, really, so, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68700265252 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59354871648 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474801061008 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6799608865 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.35 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255096205409 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792921427795 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126982379769 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172426480255 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129890355422 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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