Thank to the development of the modern technology, nowadays people can know various things happened in this world without even going out. There are plenty of people who like to read all those news and believe that they are all important. In contrast, from my perspective, I hold the counterargument that it is a waste of time to know about those event unlikely have the impact on our daily life.
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To begin with, It is common situation that in the modern society, people spend a considerable number of time on the fragment reading, which means those partial and meaningless news such as the scandals of some celebrity. It could be totally a waste of time since knowing those information or not could produce little effect on one's daily life. To illustrate this idea, I would like to use the example of myself. I used to like reading the news about the economy or the foreign political scandals despite that it has no relationship with my daily life and like to debate with others about what is the right and what is the wrong. Several years pasted, and after many things, I found that this world is not only about the black and the white, but their mixture, the grey. I could be better if I use those time to study some political theory systematically. Therefore, I hold the opinion that knowing unimportant things could be a waste of time.
Another reason to endorse my view is that in the fast-paced society, no one have the time and energy to care about them. My father , for example, is a programmer in a IT company. Besides those programming books, he hardly read any news or hot post on the Weibo because he has spend a lot of effort on the work, and is too exhausted to read anything not important. As the result, I consent it is not important to read those news unrelated to our life.
It is partially reasonable for many people to hold the opinion that knowing unimportant things are essential since it is not easy to judge whether it could produce some effect on your life in the future, just like the economy crisis happened in the wall street which cause so many unexpected results. However, in my opinion, compared to spend time worrying about the unclear future, we should pay more attention to our daily life such as speeding time with our families . consequently, I still strongly believe that it is unimportant to know those trivial.
To wrap it up, at the first glance, It could be hard to choose my side, especially given the complicated situation in the real world,. Nevertheless, after deeply consideration, I would like give my support to the view that it is not important to know things which is unlikely to produce any effect on your life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...e plenty of people who like to read all those news and believe that they are all important...
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Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'those events'?
Suggestion: this event; those events
...hat it is a waste of time to know about those event unlikely have the impact on our daily l...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ely have the impact on our daily life. i To begin with, It is common situation ...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...e totally a waste of time since knowing those information or not could produce little effect on o...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and energy to care about them. My father , for example, is a programmer in a IT co...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: a; IT
...ather , for example, is a programmer in a IT company. Besides those programming book...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... , for example, is a programmer in a IT company. Besides those programming books, he ha...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...or hot post on the Weibo because he has spend a lot of effort on the work, and is too...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
..., I consent it is not important to read those news unrelated to our life. It is partial...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some effect on your life in the future, just like the economy crisis happened in...
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Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... such as speeding time with our families . consequently, I still strongly believe ...
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Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...ch as speeding time with our families . consequently, I still strongly believe that it is un...
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Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... complicated situation in the real world,. Nevertheless, after deeply consideratio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61974789916 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59761627958 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457983193277 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5494692557 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.736842105 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0526315789 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166305291399 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053073451455 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456513280063 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103862395044 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421713633958 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.