Basically, now-a-days, life become so complicated and complex that sometimes, becomes too annoying to get over it. It is extremely difficult as well as to understand the figure and facts about life. yes, I strongly in favor of today's possible events, should recognize because it effects gravely. If I have to mentioned, I would like to points towards 9/11 scenario, which was held on 9 September/2001 in United States. That event changes many lives especially Muslim/British conspiracies. Thus, it is important to have a knowledge about the situations all over the globe.
First of all, the moments spend in every corner of world, commit some sort of scene, that every person should know about the whole. Especially, if its effects your life too. Then, ability comes and maintain your whole perspective for your life style. Like: if there is heavy rainfall in the North and it transmit to South, now, you are capable to being some planning before the heavy rainfall comes across the South part.
Secondly, as I points out the major event, to illustrate: 9/11, which is the biggest event occurred in past history, it destroyed many of the Muslim life. Perhaps, it may be not meaningful for the people all over the world, but as a familial background and relations, it caused much disturbance to the worldwide. Hence, this proves that every person must contain acknowledgement about the main situations.
Next, some events really touches your inner soul, and you are not even able to know about it, as a result, indeed get amuse your body. For example: elections of America, many supporters were with Henry Clinton, I was also in favor of her, but that day, I was not aware form the election day and that event was passed. Afterwards, i knew this by my friends and just stuck for that moment and felt ashamed too.
To conclude, the above statement is right in it's path, that people must get awareness, what is happening in the world, due to it reflection, in turn, may be directly or indirectly facing it's outcome in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yes
...rstand the figure and facts about life. yes, I strongly in favor of todays possible...
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Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'point'.
Suggestion: point
...If I have to mentioned, I would like to points towards 9/11 scenario, which was held o...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'transmits'?
Suggestion: transmits
...e is heavy rainfall in the North and it transmit to South, now, you are capable to being...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'point'
Suggestion: point
... across the South part. Secondly, as I points out the major event, to illustrate: 9/1...
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Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and that event was passed. Afterwards, i knew this by my friends and just stuck ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, sort of, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83908045977 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64152836129 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6219025463 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173690899977 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513506324056 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426057741702 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879663598698 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231360593278 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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